This is part of a series of tanka on the theme ‘Betrothed’. The previous poems in this series are given below.
Betrothed – Tanka #1
Betrothed – Tanka #2
A tanka is a Japanese form of poetry containing thirty one syllables, in five lines of five, seven, five, seven and seven respectively.
Thank you for reading this poem.
Oh how lovely Vignesh! That’s desperate yearning is so sweet it makes me smile.
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Thank you so much Bree 🙂 Very pleased to hear that 🙂
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Lovely Shakespearean styled Tanka
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Oh wow, that is such a nice compliment 🙂 Thank you so much 🙂
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You are most welcome Vignesh
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Oh wow – beautifully written!
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Thank you so much Moksha 🙂
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You have captured the yearning and angst so well!
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Thank you so much Shweta 🙂
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It’s out from the core of your heart, beautiful meaning of deep feelings Vighnesh, excellently emotional 👌
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Thank you so much Suma 🙂 Really appreciate your kind comments 🙂
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A sweet pleasure always 😊
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this is packed with emotions, Vignesh!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Really nice pick of words!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Aww! The yearning so palpable. Lovely.
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Thank you so much Punam 🙂
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My pleasure. 😊
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well done Vignesh, a real romantic … look out Mich!
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Thank you so much Kate 🙂
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my pleasure, always glad to meet more bloggers 🙂
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Likewise 🙂
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It’s just so bitter sweet
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Ha ha, thank you Pam 🙂
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It’s only a matter of time, Vignesh. Hold steady your floundering heart. 🙂
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Ha ha, thanks for that Terveen 😀
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Beautiful piece, Vignesh.❤️
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Thank you so much Grace 🙂
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My pleasure, dear friend.💕
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Wow
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Thank you so much Vartika 🙂
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Such a lovely piece, Vignesh! So much emotion, love and depth in those lines…amazingly done 🖤🤗
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Thank you so much Ace 🙂
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Beautiful 👌
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Thank you so much 🙂
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A pleasure
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Woww! This is amazing Vignesh..! Very BEAUTIFULLY penned..!🙂
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Thank you so much Fil 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Very beautifully done!!
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Thank you so much PD 🙂
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So emotional just touched heart. Excellent 👌😊💐🌹!
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Thank you so much Priti 🙂 Pleased to hear that 🙂
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🤗🍫🍭🙂💕👍❣️My pleasure. Stay happy always ❤️❤️
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Feels like speaking to me. Very well expressed, Vignesh!
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Thank you so much AB 🙂
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