Underneath a canopy of the stars
We lay as if the world were ours
Blessed us the night sky so divine
Making us a couple on cloud nine
Deep in the waters a dolphin dove
As I and she felt lost forever in love
Pebbles and shells topped the sand
As we lay holding each other’s hand
The chilling beach breeze tickled us
A smile appeared on our faces thus
The rip-roaring waves came rushing
While love washed over us gushing
The greyish water flowed with grace
As I turned sideways to see her face
The smell of salt was near palpable
Even in the dark she was admirable
Afar from us rode some cruise ships
As I reached out to kiss her soft lips
From above a meteor began to drop
While we wished for the time to stop
The angels wished us a dreamy night
While we dozed off in the moon light.
The poem resembles a painting, a beautiful one.
Thank you for sharing this. Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much Megh 🙂 So pleased to hear that 🙂
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Your poem has a rhythm like the gentle waves of the ocean with shimmering light of the beautiful sentiment just like the moonlight, the rhymes make it soothingly musical – absolutely stunning beautiful poem!
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You are so generous with your compliment PD 🙂 Thank you so much 🙂
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You are very welcome!! 🙂
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A breathtaking poem, Vignesh….the meaning, the depth & the flow…
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Beautiful rhythm and rhyme, Vignesh. You painted a serene picture with your lovely imagery. 🙂
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lovely imagery. its a pleasure to read this poem!😃
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My word Vignesh! This is beautiful, it’s like a dream. Lovely writing!
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This is beautiful, Vignesh. Such a smooth and lovely piece!
Dolphin love, breeze tickled us – loved these phrases
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Gorgeous, it’s like a dream brought to life
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Beautifully written, Vignesh ☺
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I love the rhythm of creation
Of the night
The pattern, the flow
Of the poetry
And the tempo of
Lovers making love
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So beautiful, Vignesh. The love frames a soft and delicate picture. The sand, ocean, and two lovebirds. That’s a complete tale of rhythm. 🙂
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Beautiful piece, Vignesh. Wonderful flow. Love it!💕
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Just beautiful!!
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Nicely composed
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delightful vivid imagery so romantically entwined!
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The imagery is just lovely! 😍😌
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Thank you so much Nehal 🙂
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Your poetry is like a dream in my dark night. Love and serenity to you. I’m Fairy Queen from Italy 🤗🤗🤗
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Thank you so much for your generous words 🙂 Nice to meet you 🙂 I will check out your blog 🙂
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Beautiful..nothing more romantic than a beach at night when you are in love:)
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Thank you so much Karima 🙂
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