Betrothed – Tanka #2

This is part of a series of tanka on the theme ‘Betrothed’. The previous poem in this series is Betrothed – Tanka #1

A tanka is a Japanese form of poetry containing thirty one syllables, in five lines of five, seven, five, seven and seven respectively.

Thank you for reading this poem.


42 thoughts on “Betrothed – Tanka #2

      1. Thanks for responding, Vignesh.
        I was wondering….are my words lost in virtual space?
        That would be great. Something that would get you maximum engagement. Maybe an older piece that wasn’t read by many.
        You take the call on that. 🙂

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        1. Ha ha, sorry about that. I meant to reply, but wanted to check if I have anything to send to you before responding. And then I forgot to respond :O Yes, I too have something similar to what you say. I will send it across. Thanks for inviting me. Very kind of you to do that 🙂

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  1. The series are good and you are performing excellently and sweet sound of the poem memories us when two people fall in love it just happens with them. Well written 😊👌🌹

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