Heaven looks bright,
My kite takes flight.
Aims for the skies,
With zealous eyes.
Looks a little frail,
Despite its long tail.
Higher the kite goes,
As far as I chose.
In its flight a stud,
Goes where I said.
Wind tries to whack,
But I have its back.
Dances in the air,
With such a flair.
Envious of the birds,
Mumbles angry words.
Makes a fluttering noise,
Though it got no voice.
Wants to chase the crow,
So wants me to let it go.
Tries to beat the plane,
How I wish it were sane.
Fearless like the Superman,
Kissing clouds its big plan.
Flying without a companion,
Is my lightweight champion.
what a lovely poem for a lovely sunny day.
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Thank you so much Ayieko 🙂
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amazing!
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Thank you so much kizito 🙂
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I love your joy in this … I’ve also skited about my kite
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Thank you so much Kate 🙂 I just went through your poem and commented on it 🙂
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much appreciated, nice to share when we have something in common!
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Love it, it’s so whimsical, it made me smile 😁
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Thank you so much Deb 🙂
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A fascinating lonesome lightweight.
Love how you flew the kite right down to the last detail
Your zest for words, but not only that, the preparation to give it form is so admirable.
This champion so made me smile
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Thank you so much for your generous words 🙂 Really appreciate it 🙂
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Breathtaking, a wonderful feeling.
You are most welcome🙂
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Good one Vignesh 👏👏Loved the rhymings too.
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Thank you so much 🙂 Really appreciate it 🙂
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Great piece, Vignesh. Love the flow. Fabulous.🙌👏💕❤️
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Thank you so much Grace 🙂
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My pleasure.💕❤️💕
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Love how you bring a kite to life, Vignesh. I tried to fly a few when I was a kid. But that was an unsuccessful venture. Lovely writing! 🙂
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Ha ha, all of us have had our share of disaster while trying to fly kites 😀 Thank you so much Terveen 🙂
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Ooh, love the flight your words took! My husband is an avid kite flier, so I thoroughly enjoyed your lovely verse, Vignesh. 😊
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Oh really? It’s good to hear he still flies them 🙂 It’s very rare to see adults fly them 🙂 Thank you so much Punam 🙂
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He does. 😀 You are welcome. 😊
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Beautiful narrative Vignesh 🙂
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Thank you so much Radhika 🙂
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What a lovely joyful poem! I loved this line – How I wish it were sane – conveying the passion as if.
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Thank you so much PD 🙂
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You are very welcome.
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Beautifully written, Vignesh…loved the rhyming…and the detailing
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Thank you so much Navin 🙂
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You’re very welcome, Vignesh ✨
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Ah, what a delight to read of this kite’s flight! I really enjoyed this Vignesh, I was envisioning every word and that my friend is exactly what a writer/poet should do 👏👏👏👏👏
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Thank you so much Bree 🙂 Really appreciate your kind words 🙂
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That’s an awesome poem, Vignesh. ☺️🌹
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Thank you so much Jeff 🙂
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Lovely poem
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Thank you so much Sowmya 🙂
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Beautifully penned, Vignesh!💖
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Thank you so much Aayushi 🙂
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The sky is the limit. It’s been so long since I saw a kite fly. Brought back memories:)
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u rocked it vignesh !
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Lovely poem..keep writing✍🏻
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Wow!! Wonderful ode, Vignesh. 🙂
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Thank you so much Aishwarya 🙂
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