This poem is written in response to the What do You See #87 challenge hosted by Sadje.
Here is the picture.
Homebound so far
Too young to be out
Delight fills the baby.
A ride in the stroller
Seeing the vast blue skies
Gaping at the huge multi-colored wall
For the first time, ever!
‘How sweet of momma to take me out’!
Too joyous to sit tight
It jerks and jumps in its stroller
Desperate to turn back
Wanting to look at its mother
As if to thank her,
As if to hug her,
As if to kiss her,
As if to tell her,
‘Momma, you are my best gift ever’.
Delightful!
LikeLike
Thank you so much Chris 🙂
LikeLike
Beautiful , Vignesh.I love how you wrote this from the baby’s perception.So sweet.💕
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much Grace. Coming from you, it must be good then 😂
LikeLiked by 1 person
So sweet of you to say.All of your post are excellent, my friend.💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Grace. So pleased to hear that 🙂 ❤❤❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
💕🙏💕
LikeLike
Me too, it’s beautiful. You wrote about the not so obvious 👏🏽
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Woww..! Such a marvelous piece..! Heart warming words..!😊
LikeLike
Thank you so much Fil 🙂 Appreciate your comments 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome Vignesh..!
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww what a lovely post!!! So perfectly written…I absolutely love it. Well done 🤗🖤
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much Ace ❤️ So pleased by your comments 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Adorable post. Beautifully written.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Kritika 🙂 Appreciate it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awesome! Loved it😀
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much 🙂 Appreciate it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Such a sweet peom. Well done!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Mason 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Such a sweet take, Vignesh. I loved it 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Shweta 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re very welcome 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautifully written!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much Vartika 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Loved this take …. So beautifully written .. 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much 🙂 Really appreciate your comments 🙂
LikeLike
Aww, this was so cute! ♥♥
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Sonali 🙂 Pleased to hear that 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
♥♥
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great take!!! Loved it!!! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Ramya 🙂
LikeLike
So Sweet Poem. Loved all your posts !💜✨
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Dakshali for your lovely comment and going through my work 🙂 Thanks for following me 🙂
LikeLike
You’re welcome Vignesh !
LikeLike
Something wrong with your WDYS post. I am unable to reply to you there.
Lost followers? What do you mean by lost? :O How?
LikeLike
Oh no again. I thought it was resolved. Recently, I purchased the domain from the self host. And now it is totally new site but only my previous posts are backk..
LikeLike
Oh. I don’t know how it works. But sorry to hear that.
Nevertheless, you have amazing content, especially the poems I read 🙂 So I am sure you will start getting more followers soon 🙂
Just keep writing. I just followed yours 🙂
LikeLike
Thank you so much, Vignesh. Now, it is making me crazy. I don’t know what’s problem with it .
LikeLike
Very strange to hear.
Anyway, like I said don’t be disheartened and keep writing 🙂
LikeLike
Yes. Thank you
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome 🙂
LikeLike
Can you please try again for me 🙏🏻 Of this time it doesn’t work I have to contact the helpline services..
LikeLike
Tried again but still not working
LikeLike
Oh..okay no problem. Thank you!
LikeLike
No problem. Hope to see more of your work 🙂
LikeLike
You surely will .
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s sooo lovely n cute poem of Momma n baby out for roaming. Beautiful write up Vighnesh.
LikeLike
Thank you so much Suma 🙂
LikeLike
My pleasure 😇
LikeLiked by 1 person
That poem is SO sweet! And full of light and grace! I love it!
LikeLike
Thank you so much Marie 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is so beautiful 💓
LikeLike
Thank you Geet 🙂 Appreciate your comment 🙂
LikeLike
You captured the baby’s joy well Vignesh 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Radhika 🙂
LikeLike
This is really so cute and touching, Vignesh. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Terveen 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautifully expressed….
LikeLike
Thank you so much Navin. Sorry for the late reply, just found your comment in Spam.
LikeLiked by 1 person
No worries….you’re welcome Vignesh
LikeLiked by 1 person